Wednesday, November 7, 2007

VeRy RaNdOm

I want to feel your love
To be loved by you
As you care for me
I feel your love is true
To be there, as I place my
Lay my head upon you
I want to feel your presence
Touch your spirit while
You look at me and make me whole
This is personal, me and you
As I shout "I love you"
To be loved by you,
I get so excited, so excited
At the very thought of you
Love Love, Love Love, LOVE!

By: Me

14 comments:

Unknown said...

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS PIECE

Jay said...

I miss having love near...love your last 2 post

Don't Oppress Me said...

Beautiful, dude! Love is indeed a wonderful thing.

bLaQ~n~MiLD said...

Great post!!

Omar Ramon said...

aw so mushy. lol
Stop watching those chick flicks !
Sike nah let me leave you alone. Do ya thang bruh. *smile*

It IS fly to be feeling like that about someone.

Jersey Brotha said...

Nice poem

Ty said...

Nice.

ShawnQt said...

:) and :(

mountii said...

DEEP AND WELL...RaNDom lol

mountii said...

That poem is so deep i just keep coming back to it

mountii said...

i do have to ask what inspired it because it reminds me of this problem i have...i think i had a crush on this gay white dude right...and i did something bad to him

mountii said...

i basically kinda outed him on to my pal using facebook... i wrote how it went down on my blog and how i felt sorry, but since he'll never see the blog i feel bad because it's not a real confession/apology

and this poem just kinda seems like a combo of both and apology/confession is all

Omar Ramon said...

aight mister love love love...get yo behind back here!

Promiscuous X said...

wow I see everybody has been away from blogger lately. Alliedlilknight bring ya lil ass back here an post BATMAN has Returned lol